100 Word Count Challenge – Week 24 The season (version 2)
Here is the twenty-fourth post of the 100 WC for Grown ups. It is a weekly challenge for all those writers who want to extend their audience to get feedback on their work.
This is this week’s prompt is “This week’s 100 word challenge is a sort of party game. This week you write 50 words on ‘The Season’ (not including the two title words in the count) and next week you come back and continue someone else’s entry with the remaining 50 words. I love the way Julia comes up with such original prompts every week.”
Here is the original prompt from @susankmann (http://www.susankmann.com/ )
The Season
The presents are wrapped and placed decoratively under the Christmas tree. The cookie has been eaten leaving behind a few convincing crumbs. The carrot has been nibbled and the milk has been drunk. Yet, something is niggling away as she sat back down on the sofa. What has she forgotten…
My Ending @nickotkdIV (https://mrovertonprimary.wordpress.com/)
(version 2)
She looked at the room all decorated and right, there was something missing that began to give her a fright. What was it!! Her mind began to run. Why was this happen on such a festive night? Then out of nowhere came the answer. Christmas wouldn’t be Christmas without the …..
Presents
Ah! Great! I can imagine some parents doing that after all the mania of getting it all ready! Great ending Nick!
Two different ending that encapsulates how many households feel on Christmas Morning. both constrasting